Blue Fairy

thats not copy and paste thats downloading and most people would rather not download something in case something happens. its better just being able to open and read it. good ...

Hi Right well most of the typing errors have been pinpointed but I have noticed a couple of sentences that could be improved. the first one: I don't think they ...

I have not had a chance to read the other three chapters of this so forgive if I don't understand some things: Alita and Jansen stepped [url]on ward[/url] Do you ...

hi ata this is so amazingly written i couldn't find much to say about it. At the forest’s edge i didn't understand this though i don't have a suggestion to ...

hi personally i don't think there is much to criticise because the words and discriptions are great but the order of some of it doesn't flow as much as it ...

firstly, i think you missed out the word 'of' in between smell and lilac in the first line. you say the room is peaceful and serene and then you say ...

hi i've realised quite a few mistakes but they can be fixed quickly like: siad- said In 3007, a century from now Isn't 3007 a millenium away- 1000 years away ...

hi 'It feels like a different field with a different feeling-with a different guy' this doesn't really make sense. What about something like- A different feeling towards a different man ...

im confused. that amount of characters packed in too that much writing has lost me. maybe you could make the starting longer and spend a paragraph on each two people ...